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Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

heart/心

「お互いに

 触れ合った

 心の温もりは

 消え去った」

the warmth of our hearts

that once touched each other

has

faded away.

empty/空

「名を呼ぶ声も

 空に溶ける

 心はただ

 空いたままで」

calling your name

melts into the sky,

and the heart simply

remains empty.

※Japanese word “空” has two meanings: “sky” and “empty.”

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Oh I love that word 💜

Thank you for complementing my art with yours!

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

Void_of power.

Hope -flooded.

A shivering flame,

almost a body.

- gone

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Oh I adore this comment <3

theinkspilled's avatar

There’s something that lingers with me after reading your poems that is unshakable. I truly love them🤍

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

That touches my heart deeply. Thank you

atlas's avatar

i love poetry like this❤️ there's something beautiful about the shortness of it. its fleeting and it makes me want to read it again and again

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you, that is a very thoughtful compliment and means a lot to me 💜

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Yes, sometimes I let a few words hide a lot of feelings 💜

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Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

everything feels… empty