hm… I actually love your interpretation. It feels like what we don’t say in marriage too - everything that stays invisible but still holds the structure. Thank you.
Jeanne, thank you for your reply. Actually, my wife and I have been living separately for more than ten years now, but we get along quite well! Maybe distance really can have a positive effect. 😇
I love the image of the silence growing. Deep level there.
Thanks for reading.
Thank you 💜💜
Wonderful. It just is what it is. Cosmic melody. The good the bad and the ugly and the beauty.
Couldn’t have said it better 💜
Oh, Kasu! That last line! Gorgeous! Beautiful poem.
Thank you Kelly 🥹💜
You’re welcome, Kasu. Be well.
Okay..even the shape of the words as they travel pulse with the sound of the void
then the void is not empty - only listening back.
yessssssssssss
Amazingly beau. 6th dimension ? 7th? 9th?
maybe not a number… maybe a threshold you only feel when language starts dissolving.
This one took me to the quantum field.
Thank you 🥹🖤 I think that’s the best compliment this piece can receive!
Thanks for reading. Maybe we’re always already there, just learning how to notice it.
I felt like it was portraying the difference between romance and marriage. Thank you for this wonderful collaboration.
hm… I actually love your interpretation. It feels like what we don’t say in marriage too - everything that stays invisible but still holds the structure. Thank you.
Jeanne, thank you for your reply. Actually, my wife and I have been living separately for more than ten years now, but we get along quite well! Maybe distance really can have a positive effect. 😇
Are you closer like this?
Yes! It sounds strange, but a little distance has actually been good for us. 😇