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The Stranger's avatar

Beautiful and magical as always 🫢🏾

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you dear πŸ₯°πŸ’œ

The Stranger's avatar

You're welcome ❀️

[ r e m e m b e r ]'s avatar

α₯«α­‘.ִָ֢𓂃

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

πŸ’• this one is a powerful little thing.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you very much <3

WinterChef's avatar

Little words … enormous power🀍

Just Kayla's avatar

An affecting artful take on "walking through the door". This one stayed for its simplicity

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

thank you Kayla! it means a lot!

imi's avatar
Apr 30Edited

I love how niche and elegant your work is. It is a great example of how less can be more. With very few words, this carries very much depth.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you very much Imi <3 I highly appreciate it. I like to play with different styles and lengths, but most times I let silence and emotions carry the most.

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow your stuff is sooo good you never disappoint Kasu !!!! 🫢🫢🫢

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you amiga πŸ₯°πŸ˜­πŸ’œ

Jackson Rich's avatar

Very on point. A poem practically everyone of any substance can relate to.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you πŸ’œ

Chris Heape's avatar

Kasu, this is very, very strong.

A life transition in only 17 words.

A relational tension between I and Me with a deep psychological charge quivering underneath.

Many thanks.

Best, Chris.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you πŸ₯°πŸ’œ

Chris Heape's avatar

You're welcome.

Great to see.

Best, Chris.

Stephen's avatar

well done! you've turned the threshold into silent beauty. I particularly admire the restraint.

minimal really works with the subject perfectly.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you πŸ’œπŸ₯°

Dean M's avatar

Kasu, this is fabulous.

I've spoken.

🫢🏼🫢🏼🫢🏼

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you πŸ₯°