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[ r e m e m b e r ]'s avatar

𝓢𝓢𝓢 [[[πŸ–€]]]

Kelly Trost's avatar

Astoundingly gorgeous!

small wounds's avatar

Thank you πŸ₯ΉπŸ’œ

Kelly Trost's avatar

You’re most welcome.

wildflower's avatar

❀️‍πŸ”₯❀️‍πŸ”₯❀️‍πŸ”₯

small wounds's avatar

πŸ’œπŸ’œ

HVR - James's avatar

Unconquered! Love it.

small wounds's avatar

πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ means a lot!

The Writing Nutrition Nerd's avatar

EVERY TIME I read one of your pieces, I know why you just keep rising. You're in your element, friend. It is a beautiful becoming.

small wounds's avatar

Thank you, that means a lot to me πŸ’œ

The Writing Nutrition Nerd's avatar

I’m glad, friend <3

Mandy Adams's avatar

The imagery! Beautiful written.

small wounds's avatar

Thank you Mandy! It means a lot to me!

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Wow. Loved every single line of this Small Wounds. I must admit this wasn't the poem I was expecting after the prompt as "my happy place", but that's what made it even better.

My favourite lines and stanza:

γ…€

Our skin shimmered,

our eyes grew deepβ€”

emptiedβ€”

and the sweet taste of blood

pierced our souls.

small wounds's avatar

πŸ₯°! Thank you, that makes me really happy πŸ₯Ή

Just Kayla's avatar

Your careful translation shows. I'd have never known. I definitely felt the scene and emotions, Loved!

small wounds's avatar

thank you very much! <3

_sR.'s avatar

❀️‍πŸ”₯

Strangeencountersofthekind's avatar

I loved this so much! So beautifully written.

small wounds's avatar

Thank you very much, it means a lot to me!