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James (HVR)'s avatar

This is fucking incredible!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you! šŸ’œšŸ’œ I’m glad it worked out

Olly von's avatar

That literally creeped me out so much I’m going out of this room I’ve been hiding in to play on my phone back out to where the people are šŸƒā€ā™€ļø

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Hahahaha yeah this one hits different at night 🤣

Olly von's avatar

I’m kinda mad at you šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

🤣🤣🤣 sorry šŸ™šŸ»

Nimila's avatar

I'm sad and also glad I didn't experience this at night, you know?

This is excellent!!!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🄰 it’s a better experience a night for sure haha

Kelly Trost's avatar

Kasu,

this was GREAT! I'm so glad I read it in the morning and not just before bed! I'm also so glad I know you write good, scary stories. Love this genre!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank youu! Is not the most popular genre among my audience but I do enjoy it a lot šŸ’œ

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

Reading this turns cinematic - as if the words stop being text and start taking shape in a film.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you! That was my intention, glad it came out that way šŸ’œ

Original Worlds (Ira Robinson)'s avatar

Really awesome story! You did great on it. Spent a lot of years as a talk radio host and had some bizarre callers myself lol

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank youu! šŸ’œ That’s so cool! I was a radio host too for a while, and yeah, it can get weird sometimes 🤣. Thank you for reading! I’m subbing to you!

lchristopher's avatar

Holy shit.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Is this a compliment? šŸ‘€ haha

Opalus's avatar

This is amazing writing. A super evocative and imaginative piece. Enjoyed every step of the way.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you very much! šŸ„°šŸ’œ

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Kasu holy moly of all things!!! This is insane! What a sick cool piece! I’m beyond HAPPY to read such work. I was in a thriller the entire time. You’re just simply out of this world!! Wow wow wow 🤯

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you šŸ„¹šŸ’œšŸ™šŸ»

Cierra Angeline's avatar

Wow. Amazing

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🄰

Jackson Rich's avatar

Harrowing. Love it.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you! šŸ’œšŸ’œ

Mathew C. Bryant • Horror Poet's avatar

Love the creativity here, bonus points for mixed media. Excellent work with the intensity from start to finish šŸ‘

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🄰

Claudine's avatar

That was intense!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

I hope you enjoyed it!

WritingWithWater's avatar

I am very glad the sun is shining as I experienced this.. Wow!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Hahahaha thank you?

WritingWithWater's avatar

it is wonderful!

The In Between's avatar

This is so cool. Not just the story but the way it was told. It feels like an experience.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you! šŸ’œ that was what I was trying to do!