“An absence my body remembers” quietly holds the center of this piece for me. The poem moves like early morning itself — half memory, half weather — and never tries to explain the wound it’s circling around. That restraint is what gives it atmosphere.
"Tell me I'm dreaming"..... that stays and intertwines with the music and poem...that dreamlike feeling of invisibility...of no one looking........ i have felt it too....and somehow this drew me into it and welcomed me too.....and reinforces why i try not to walk by anyone who looks like they could use a friend.... thank you... this is so powerful.
I long for the day when nothing moves. It's too much movement now.
That’s actually my favorite thing about this poem.
It captures how much I loved walking through Buenos Aires very late at night. When no one is looking.
“An absence my body remembers” quietly holds the center of this piece for me. The poem moves like early morning itself — half memory, half weather — and never tries to explain the wound it’s circling around. That restraint is what gives it atmosphere.
Thank you Antonio <3 that means a lot to me.
Wow, Wow, WOW Kasu!
Every bit of this is stunning!
The video and music, with its heartbeat, carry through as a core emotion in this piece.
The choice of indigo is such a vibrant visual and internal colour to choose, and it works so well!
And at its core, a love poem with loss and ache, but such tenderness and intimacy.
Loved this.
Best thing I've seen in a very long time!
PS. Thank you so much for the mention and being a small inspiration in a big piece!
Thank you for such a lovely comment, it means a lot coming from you!
"Tell me I'm dreaming"..... that stays and intertwines with the music and poem...that dreamlike feeling of invisibility...of no one looking........ i have felt it too....and somehow this drew me into it and welcomed me too.....and reinforces why i try not to walk by anyone who looks like they could use a friend.... thank you... this is so powerful.
Thank you, I really appreciate it 💜 I'm really proud of this one and your words motivate to keep creating 🥹
I hope you will always keep creating...you are an amazing poet...and have left me wordless ...
That truly means a lot 🙏🏻 I will for sure try 💜
Felt the weight come off in this one. Beautiful and Blue (or indigo) 💙
Thank you 💙🩵 I really love this one! I lived in Buenos Aires so it holds a lot of meaning for me
I lived.
I drank.
I loved.
The whole poem was like an exhale. Very on them. I enjoyed all of them. This one you could feel how special 💙
Thank you. I did give this one special treatment haha 💙🩵
Really really happy you felt them with me.
That motivates me to keep going.
Please we need all the colors. Really cool concept breathing life into them !
Green Yellow Orange Pink Black on the queue 💜
🥳
Oh my goodness 😍😍😍 wow.
Thank you 🥰!
I loved this so much 🖤
I don't know how I missed it
Thank you 🙏🏻💙🩵 it’s literally my favorite thing I’ve published here
You're welcome
Well, all your poems are my favorite poems of yours 🤎🖤
If that makes sense.
This one and the brown one hit deep 🔥✨
What a beautiful experience 🫶🫶🫶🫶
Thank you 💙🩵
Gorgeous imagery! Liminal and haunting!
Thank you Sam! <33
Love this! Amazing!!! 🤩
Thank you Kim! <3 It is definitely my favorite piece I’ve published here, so that makes me happy. I’m enjoying the colored series so far
Are you familiar with @Pretty Thunder ?
No o.o! Please enlighten me haha
DM. She’s amazing and blue reminded me of some of her stuff.
Amazing. I’d love to know how to do that
Thank you Cheryl! 💙🩵 appreciate you 🥰
How to do what? 👀
Wow.. this is absolutely stunning!
The line "an absense my body remembers" really holds it together and makes it truly vulnerable..
Thank you 🥰 really glad you liked it!
Wowwwww
This is a wonderful and evocative series of poems. Very original and emotional.🩵🫧
Thank you 🥰💙🩵
Beautiful💜
Thank you Claudia 🩵💙 I appreciate it!
Very nice.
Thank you 💙🩵