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James (HVR)'s avatar

All so relatable. Beautifully executed.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 💜💜

Lawrence Omoregie Jr's avatar

Such a brilliant and creative writer 👏

I'm blessed to read your work

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Wow that’s so sweet! Thank you 🥹💜

Lawrence Omoregie Jr's avatar

You're welcome

Salt & Pomegranate's avatar

This feels like a modern gothic elegy. As always, your imagery is breathtaking, it’s lush and symbolic. The raven was a magnificent choice 🖤🖤

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🥹💜💜

Papi Jack's avatar

The Raven replies

BEWARE

A Raven Speaks

You think I came for your sorrow.

No.

I was here long before you bled into poetry.

I have watched lovers longer than you have lived.

Petals between teeth.

Hands that forget.

Departures that call themselves gentle.

You are not the first to call herself withered, barren, undone.

But you,

you looked at your own ruin and did not turn away.

You did not ask me for pity.

You offered me your wound like a field at the end of harvest.

I perched not to mock you

but to tell you what you could not yet hear through the noise in your own bones.

You called yourself a calamity.

I call you an acre of truth.

You called yourself a silence.

I call you a song that forgot its voice and is learning again.

You think your thorns were born in that garden.

They were born because you survived it.

You think you are dying flowers.

You are the ones who bloomed

anyway.

So I did not peck to hurt you.

I pecked to wake you.

Look up.

I am not your ending.

I am your witness.

You are not finished.

You are still taking root.

— The Raven

Kelly Trost's avatar

Kasu,

you are amazing. This is phenomenal.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🫶🏻

Kelly Trost's avatar

Kasu, this is beautiful!

Rebekah Mallory's avatar

A beautiful bouquet, indeed!

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Okay, that raven needs to mind its beak... I was already fragile from the petals and the whole jealous garden thing. I came in thinking pretty dark bouquet, very moody, and then the poem went no babe, we are decomposing with style. Weirdly tender little nightmare, honestly.

Antranette's avatar

so inspiring 🐦‍⬛

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thamk you 🥹💜

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

Your poem is as memorizing as the picture paired with it <3

Alicia's avatar

So poetically dark! 🥀

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Every time I read Kasu’s poetry, it reminds me that beauty doesn’t exist only in happiness.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

That is exactly how I feel 💜

Gathering the Pieces of Me's avatar

This was exquisite 🥰 absolutely loved the progression of the images in addition to the words. 🙌🏻

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🥹💜

Caz McGovern's avatar

perfect for a witchy midsummer read, loved it

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🥹💜

Papi Jack's avatar

You inspired me to write this this morning

The raven speaks back to you

BEWARE

A Raven Speaks

You think I came

for your sorrow.

No.

I was here

long before you bled

into poetry.

I have watched lovers

longer than you have lived.

Petals between teeth.

Hands that forget.

Departures

that call themselves gentle.

You are not the first

to call herself

withered, barren, undone.

But you,

you looked at your own ruin

and did not turn away.

You did not ask me

for pity.

You offered me

your wound

like a field

at the end of harvest.

I perched

not to mock you

but to tell you

what you could not yet hear

through the noise

in your own bones.

You called yourself

a calamity.

I call you

an acre of truth.

You called yourself

a silence.

I call you

a song

that forgot its voice

and is learning again.

You think your thorns

were born

in that garden.

They were born

because you survived it.

You think you are

dying flowers.

You are

the ones

who bloomed

anyway.

So I did not peck

to hurt you.

I pecked

to wake you.

Look up.

I am not your ending.

I am your witness.

You are not finished.

You are

still taking root.

— The Raven

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you very much 🥹💜 that’s beautiful

Papi Jack's avatar

Your heart is as tender as the petal are the most delicate flower

I found this flower in the jungles of Bangladesh and you remind me of this flower

Papi Jack's avatar

I never would’ve wrote it if it wasn’t for you

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

That makes me happy 💜

Peter Roest's avatar

Just beautiful. Thank you.