This feels like a love letter to presence more than romance.
The rain begins as a refuge from loneliness, but by the end, the refuge is no longer the rain itselfāitās the person willing to stay beneath it with you.
āSomeone who loves you through the rain, through the darkā is such a beautiful idea. Not fixing, not rescuing, just staying.
Tender, weightless, and quietly hopeful. š§ļøš¤
āThe rain never told me I was too muchā is such a beautiful line. This felt like reading what it means to finally feel safe with someone instead of just understood.
This is everything! The music, lyric, the poetry. All of it is a little bit of perfection. Thank you for sharing, and I love that you are singing in Spanish, too. Love, Virg (On The Verge from the safe space).
"We are not alone."
That will stick with me.
Iām glad š„¹š
This is so so stunning. The ending feels so beautifully earned! š
Thank you š«¶
Thank you š„¹šš©µ
Elijahās verses are magical
This feels like a love letter to presence more than romance.
The rain begins as a refuge from loneliness, but by the end, the refuge is no longer the rain itselfāitās the person willing to stay beneath it with you.
āSomeone who loves you through the rain, through the darkā is such a beautiful idea. Not fixing, not rescuing, just staying.
Tender, weightless, and quietly hopeful. š§ļøš¤
Thank you Ashu, for your lovely and thoughtful comment, and for feeling it with us š„¹š
oooohh I love this Kasu and Elijah! The whole piece weaves the two of your thoughts and emotions together seemlessly, in a field of blue. Beautiful!
Thank you mark!
Thank you š„¹šš©µ
-Love feels like itās falling out of me, like rain - wild and quiet at the same time, as if the sky forgot how to choose between storm and silence.
I donāt know if itās happy or sad. If itās raining or not. If itās wild or if itās quiet. And I think thatās the beauty of it <3
Honestly same..
Perfect
Thank you!
Thank you! šš©µ
https://michaelforrestlmt.substack.com/p/secrets-of-metal?r=7sfqpz&utm_medium=ios
āThe rain never told me I was too muchā is such a beautiful line. This felt like reading what it means to finally feel safe with someone instead of just understood.
Thank you very much for reading and feeling it with us š„¹š
Beautiful
You are right we all need someone who will be with us through the rain and rainbows š
Thanks for sharing your work š„°
Thank you for reading and feeling kt with us š„¹š
you are not alone in this
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Recently, I have come to feel that it is more difficult to make someone feel at ease than to entertain them.
It certainly is.
Poignant, soft and gentle. šµ
Thank you Alicia š
You are amazing.
Thank you š„¹š
Love this! You two did an awesome job! ā¤ļø
Also rain is the best. That's why there are so many kissing scenes in it! š
Thank you! š„¹š Agreed!
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This is everything! The music, lyric, the poetry. All of it is a little bit of perfection. Thank you for sharing, and I love that you are singing in Spanish, too. Love, Virg (On The Verge from the safe space).
Thank you š„¹š Iām hispanic so I like incorporating little bits of my roots here and there
Wow this is truly nice, from dark to we are not alone, such subtle transitions...ā¤ļø
Thank you Dean š„¹š