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James (HVR)'s avatar

I fall fall fall every day at some point myself.

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Same here ❤️‍🩹🖤

Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Love this Kasu. The whole piece creates a descent into something deeper and darker and more compressed, just as you'd feel inside a black hole.

Great piece!

Virginia Curtis's avatar

Falling further down. Alice through the rabbit hole, nothing can exist, not even the light. This is so good. Love, Virg

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you Virg 💜💜🥹

Kelly Trost's avatar

Oh, Kasu! This is amazing. You have such a gift, I deeply admire both your poetry and your prose.

I hope this finds you well this morning!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you truly Kelly, your words really motivate me to keep going! 💜

Kelly Trost's avatar

Then we are even - again! I really enjoy this relationship with you. Yes, definitely a friendship but one which helps me evolve and grow.

Thank you, Kasu.

Dean M's avatar

Ah, Kasu, the mastery of bending feelings ... 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼

crim's avatar

i loved this one <3

crim's avatar

of course, my friend! i love all your poems <3 also the color idea is so cool and different, i don’t think i’ve seen anyone else do it yet

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you crim, I appreciate you 🖤🥹

Lawrence Omoregie Jr's avatar

Always lovely pieces from you

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🥹🖤

SCB 𖤝 Writer's avatar

I have no words, this is so beautifully captivating!

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🖤🥹 I appreciate it

Petra's avatar

Amazing <3

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you 🖤 and thank you for always reading me, it means a lot 🥹

Petra's avatar

<3

Salt & Pomegranate's avatar

This is hauntingly beautiful Kasu thankyou so much for sharing and hope you're doing ok <3

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

I am 🖤 I wrote this a while ago! 🥹

Salt & Pomegranate's avatar

Ok good :)

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Thank you for checking on me 🖤🖤

The In Between's avatar

You really feel the movement in this one.

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

It’s so beautiful Kasu! 🥹 thank you for taking the inspo. You’re amazing!

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

Great descent. It is telling a lot in very few words. Me recuerda a "Distance", ya sabes a lo que me refiero...

Kasu (small wounds)'s avatar

Yes 🖤 they nod to each other ✨️

Willow's avatar

🖤